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Hello all!

Well, this is my first post! :). Anyways, I'm trying to work on Rise From The Ashes but I'm really not in the mood to write. I don't know why, but I just don't want to, which isn't like me. Probably because of all the family drama going on.

Anyways, I wanted to ask you what your thoughts are on the WHOLE book so far. Likes? Dislikes? Who should be a couple? Favorite Characters? Characters you hate? Anything like that. :). That would mean a lot to me if you replied to this. Thanks!

~Alexis

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I say that the book is pretty good so far, plot's there, the emotional part of the characters are there. Though I'm a little uncertain about Cross and Alocer- I think they might the same personailty even though one is good and one is evil. Maybe if you make Alocer a little more darker, sinster-like- it could make it work better =). But other than that, I love the two immortals.

I also believe that Keira's step-mother should've died, making the drama between Keira's father and Keira more emotional =) maybe in the end, they will be okay again??

I believe you should have a few immortal people romance.. and Keira and her band mate, Ryan should be dating! >.< Other than all of that stuff, I'm enjoying your story =) and I can't wait for more soon

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